Happy Reading!!
Trufloetry
Don of Fanfix
I love the fanfic! When she first started the story in '09 I never thought that it would be filled with so many twists and turns. I think one flaw might be that it has too many twists and turns. Idk if you are following the story and I don't want to spoil the story for anyone else, but there is a lot of info for readers to swallow with every update, which might take away from the message and moral of the story. However, I do believe if the story was condensed by just a "smidget" it would be perfect. Either way, I think that Solangel is doing a great job. I'm really grateful for having the opportunity to have read all of her work!